We had done the on-line discussion when we were on first grades. And I think it is a good way that can force us to think. And we should also care about our spelling and other grammar usage. I think on-line discussion is fun that I can know other classmates’ thoughts, and it will help me to think more.
Teacher Joni always tell us paying attention out what we wrote. Sometimes we makes some little faults, but by doing on-line discussion, we can find what had we wrote, and the wrong places we did. And if teacher Joni makes wrong sentences, we can also correct them, although it seldom happens.
And there are more one thing that I think helps me a lot is structural drawing. It can help me to think what I am going to write. By doing so, I can compose a article easier and faster. Thanks to teacher Joni that teaches us so much and help us on English writing.
2008年1月13日 星期日
The Final Peer-comment Project
In the semester, teacher Joni teaches us that we can use peer-comment to improve our writing skills. So, we do peer-comment every week for our home work, At first, it is not difficult to do this, but after three weeks, it is hard to do this because there is no more wrong place that can be found.
Then, I had paid more energy on doing it. Usually, I spend about one hour reading my classmates’ articles to find wrong places, and if I am lucky enough, I can finish my work in one’s blog. But, almost every time when I do peer-comment, I have to read about three classmates’ blog to finish my work. And it is also hard to find wrong places because other classmates had found those wrong places in articles.
Thanks for teacher Joni, I think the peer-comment has benefit me a lot. By doing so, I can find wrong places in articles, and maybe those wrong places will appear on what I write. If I can find them and correct them, I think next I write something, I will aware not to make the same faults.
Then, I had paid more energy on doing it. Usually, I spend about one hour reading my classmates’ articles to find wrong places, and if I am lucky enough, I can finish my work in one’s blog. But, almost every time when I do peer-comment, I have to read about three classmates’ blog to finish my work. And it is also hard to find wrong places because other classmates had found those wrong places in articles.
Thanks for teacher Joni, I think the peer-comment has benefit me a lot. By doing so, I can find wrong places in articles, and maybe those wrong places will appear on what I write. If I can find them and correct them, I think next I write something, I will aware not to make the same faults.
2007年11月4日 星期日
A trip of night expedition & Tung-Hai night market
October 11, my club's (Chunghua 彰友會) members and I went to the 望高寮 and Tung-Hai night market. I remember it was a cold night, my partner and I rode my motorcycle to 望高寮 at first.
When we arrived at 望高寮, all the juniors are excited. No wonder they were so excited, the scenes there are too beautiful to be true. All the light and cars mixed into a wide light-sea. In front of us is Taichung city, and the back of us is Changhua city. Everybody takes pictures with each other, and I think this experience will be a forever memory of those junior schoolmates. Although there was really cold, but we all had a wonderful time there.
Then, we arrived the Tung-Hai night market. It was the second times being there. The Steamed sandwich there is so nice. It contains beef, Sour Mustard Greens and peanut powder. And there is a store sells papaya milk; their papaya milk is also my favorite. My friends and I enjoy our food there, and really happy about that night’s trip.
When we arrived at 望高寮, all the juniors are excited. No wonder they were so excited, the scenes there are too beautiful to be true. All the light and cars mixed into a wide light-sea. In front of us is Taichung city, and the back of us is Changhua city. Everybody takes pictures with each other, and I think this experience will be a forever memory of those junior schoolmates. Although there was really cold, but we all had a wonderful time there.
Then, we arrived the Tung-Hai night market. It was the second times being there. The Steamed sandwich there is so nice. It contains beef, Sour Mustard Greens and peanut powder. And there is a store sells papaya milk; their papaya milk is also my favorite. My friends and I enjoy our food there, and really happy about that night’s trip.
2007年11月3日 星期六
The new arrivals greeting camping of AFL
October 20 & October 21 were the new arrivals greeting camping of AFL. We had prepared it for months, and we all hoped that this camping will have a happy ending. Although we faced so many difficulties when we prepared this activity, finally we solved all of these problems one by one.
And new arrivals greeting camping came, actually I think it is better then I was expected. Everything is under our control and nothing bad happened. The small games are so success that every one can play happily. Although it’s really tired, at that night we worked until 2 o’clock AM. But it seemed that all of the camping members were happy about this camping. And I think this is the greatest reward for us.
Although there were so many argues and unhappiness when we plan the camping, but all the end good is good, the new arrivals greeting camping is so success. Maybe the process of working is so hard and difficult, but if we try our best, we still can do it well.
And new arrivals greeting camping came, actually I think it is better then I was expected. Everything is under our control and nothing bad happened. The small games are so success that every one can play happily. Although it’s really tired, at that night we worked until 2 o’clock AM. But it seemed that all of the camping members were happy about this camping. And I think this is the greatest reward for us.
Although there were so many argues and unhappiness when we plan the camping, but all the end good is good, the new arrivals greeting camping is so success. Maybe the process of working is so hard and difficult, but if we try our best, we still can do it well.
The president cup basketball contest, CSMU
At October 24, this day was the president cup basketball contest, CSMU. We have trained our freshman teammates for weeks, so this day was us to check our training result.
We were arranged to compete with the school of optometry. All of us desired to win the game, and there were also many people coming to court to encourage us. Although our team members are less than the school of optometry, but our morale would never less than our competitor. Soon, the game started. Everyone tried his best to win the game, and the cheer squads also encourage us. But we still lost. Although some people were too less experience to play the game, but they also wanted to help our team to win the game. Thanks for everyone that at October 24 came to sport court to encourage us.
Although we lost this game, this means that we didn’t train enough. We will still try our best to win the next game no matter who is our competitor.
We were arranged to compete with the school of optometry. All of us desired to win the game, and there were also many people coming to court to encourage us. Although our team members are less than the school of optometry, but our morale would never less than our competitor. Soon, the game started. Everyone tried his best to win the game, and the cheer squads also encourage us. But we still lost. Although some people were too less experience to play the game, but they also wanted to help our team to win the game. Thanks for everyone that at October 24 came to sport court to encourage us.
Although we lost this game, this means that we didn’t train enough. We will still try our best to win the next game no matter who is our competitor.
The tug of war contest
Because of our college birthday is around the corner, so many contests are held. At October 30, we were arranged to compete with the school of medicine. But at the time to begin, they didn’t come to the court, so the umpire judged that because of the school of medicine waived their rights, so we won the game. And the second game was at the October 31.
And at October 31, we were arranged to compete with the school of occupational therapy. We were all in excitation, and ready to fight to our enemy. First, the ladies of our apartment came to the court to match. But they lost. And then, it’s time for us to fight. Although the competitor’s people are more than us, but we never give up. At the end, we lost our game, but we felt no regret.
I think the tug of war’s meaning is not who win the game, but the process that we are hang together and try to win the game. Although the result of the game is also important, but there is a winner, there is a loser. So, we had tried our best to win the game, we are still the best.
And at October 31, we were arranged to compete with the school of occupational therapy. We were all in excitation, and ready to fight to our enemy. First, the ladies of our apartment came to the court to match. But they lost. And then, it’s time for us to fight. Although the competitor’s people are more than us, but we never give up. At the end, we lost our game, but we felt no regret.
I think the tug of war’s meaning is not who win the game, but the process that we are hang together and try to win the game. Although the result of the game is also important, but there is a winner, there is a loser. So, we had tried our best to win the game, we are still the best.
A casual meeting to a stranger
At October 29, when I waited my train to go home and studied Japanese, I met an unusual stranger. It was about eight o’clock at night, I knew that there was a stranger sitting near by me, but I saw her as a common stranger.
Not long after her sat down, she suddenly talked to me. She asked that whether I am a student or not. I said yes and asked what her job is. But she wants me to guess. So, I started to think what will her do. I saw her worn so well with a kit of suit. So I guessed that she probably is an insurance agent. She was surprised that I knew her job, and then we started talking. And in our talking, I knew that she is 25 years, graduated from Fu-Jen University Japanese Department. She likes to play badminton at weekend. We seldom talked about insurance business and something like that. She definitely is an insurance agent, I feel so comfortable when I talked to her, and even we just knew each other about 30 minute.
A stranger who has the same destination with me, a stranger who can talks to me just like good friend, a stranger who can makes me feel comfortable even most of her job is talking. I am very happy about this experience and also happy to meet her that night. Hope there is more casual meeting to strangers.
Not long after her sat down, she suddenly talked to me. She asked that whether I am a student or not. I said yes and asked what her job is. But she wants me to guess. So, I started to think what will her do. I saw her worn so well with a kit of suit. So I guessed that she probably is an insurance agent. She was surprised that I knew her job, and then we started talking. And in our talking, I knew that she is 25 years, graduated from Fu-Jen University Japanese Department. She likes to play badminton at weekend. We seldom talked about insurance business and something like that. She definitely is an insurance agent, I feel so comfortable when I talked to her, and even we just knew each other about 30 minute.
A stranger who has the same destination with me, a stranger who can talks to me just like good friend, a stranger who can makes me feel comfortable even most of her job is talking. I am very happy about this experience and also happy to meet her that night. Hope there is more casual meeting to strangers.
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